What kinds of problems should be corrected in the following paragraph during local revision?
The story Little Red Riding Hood is a fairy tale that has a moral to be told.
When Little Red Riding Hod stops to talk to the wolf that she does not know,
she makes the mistake of talking to a stranger this lack of caution puts her in
danger later in the story she finds the wolf waiting for her the moral of the
story is that one should not talk to strangers.

The story Little Red Riding Hood is a fairy tale that has a moral to be told. When Little Red Riding Hood stops to talk to the wolf that she does not know, she makes the mistake of talking to a stranger. This lack of caution puts her in danger. Later in the story, she finds the wolf waiting for her. The moral of the story is that one should not talk to strangers.

i don't think that you should. it looks amazing to me! it is definitely a lot better than the things that i can draw ; ~ ;

the emperor is made to look inferior next to faustus's power.