ONS: A student is writing a realistic fiction narrative for language arts class. Read the draft of the narrative below, and complete the task that follows (2 pts)
"An Important Decision"
With a few clicks on the school's website, I find what I am looking for the dates for
volleyball tryouts. Nothing makes me happier than that sport, whether I am casually
bumping the ball with friends in the backyard or spiking one into the opposition's court
with laser accuracy, I feel completely alive. Even though the official tryouts are a few weeks
away, I have been practicing relentlessly when the gymnasium is open to students.
My excitement leads me to call my best friend Katelyn. As soon as I hear the line ringing, a
thought occurs to me and makes my heart flutter. The first day of tryouts is the same date
as Katelyn's dance recital! She is depending on my moral support. When Katelyn's chipper
voice answers, a sudden paralysis takes over my mind and body. Eventually I mumble,
"Hey Katelyn .. hang on a second... uh, let me call you back."
Extended Response:
Continue and CONCLUDE the narrative by typing TWO or MORE paragraphs that help readers better
understand the central conflict of the story. (DOK 3) Type your response in the box below: