Which revision of the passage makes the best use of transitions? The suspect was seen leaving his home at 3:00. He drove around town
for about 45 minutes. The suspect pulled over on Persimmon Street
and talked into his cell phone. He returned home.

Ron and nick chose to start their own businesses. ron wanted to start an ice cream shop, and nick wanted to launch a television manufacturing company. ron and nick had equal amounts of funds on hand and no government regulations restricting them. months later, however, ron has already set up his business, while nick is still struggling to raise additional funds to build a factory. what was the main factor that affected nick’s business? a. an irrelevant business idea b. low demand for tvs in his country c. high start-up costs d. lack of labor economics