ACTIVITY 2 Improving Thesis Statements With your group, consider each thesis statement and decide how to improve it,
following the criteria for an effective thesis:
• Does it state your topic and focus, and answer your research question?
• Does it give an overview of your supporting points, which are logically
connected to your focus?
• Does it give enough information without too much detail?
• Does it use correct grammar and precise vocabulary?

1. I think genetically modified food is terrible.

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2. Public transportation has some advantages and disadvantages.

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3. The topic of this paper is women's rights.
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4. Confusion and tourble will probably come from the recent changes in laws about medical privacy in the united states.

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5. Space travel for ordinary people in exciting and will probably happen ones.

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