This introductory paragraph is missing a hook: For many students, college is the first time they will live away from the comforts of their childhood homes. College is a time for
making the first of life's many grown-up decisions. It is important to consider both the benefits and drawbacks to living on- or
off-campus in order to have the best experience during your college career.
Which of the following options would be the most effective hook?
There are three key points to consider about where to live during college: social life, privacy, and cost of living.
O College students must get used to eating cafeteria foor rather than home cooked meals.
O
What's worse, seeing your roommate's dirty socks in a pile in your dorm, or having to wake up a half hour earlier to drive
to class instead of simply walking across campus?
O College students usually live in dormitories on campus, but sometimes they live in other places, like apartments or houses.