Reread this paragraph, which contains the revisions you just made. Pay attention to ideas (1)The Center for Disease Control's ad with the father and his daughter effectively convinces people to get the flu vaccine (2)purpose is to encourage parents to get flu shots for their children (3)The text which tells how serious can be works with the art to accomplish this purpose (4)The target audience is parents of young children (5) Most people consider young to mean under the age of thirteen (6) The father holds his daughter protectively, sending a clear message "If you are a good parent, you will do this )The media technique that is used is universal appeal(8)All good parents want to protect their childrenthe ad suggests, and getting flu shots is one way to do this. Which sentence contains extra information that should be removed from the paragraph ?

In 1808, their friend, the romantic poet clemens brentano, asked them to collect all types of folk tales so he could use them in a book of literary fairy tales. in 1810, they sent him fifty-four texts, which they fortunately copied. fortunately, because brentano then lost the manuscript in the ölenberg monastery in alsace and never used the grimms’ texts. when they realized that brentano was not going to use the tales, they decided, upon the advice of another romantic writer and mutual friend, achim von arnim, to publish their collection. it had grown to eighty-six tales, which they published in 1812, and then another seventy, which they published in 1815. –“how the grimm brothers saved the fairy tale,” jack zipes what structural technique does the writer use in this passage? the writer describes events in chronological order. the writer describes events in their order of importance. the writer provides a central idea and then lists examples. the writer shows how the grimms made mistakes and then solved them.