Tell me if you liked my little story i came up with its about how seeking revenge is bad be honest

ignore the incorrect spelling ok ^^

so why seek revenge DONT, even if it took someone you love just dont ITS WRONG. I know know i would've done the same thing but just know there's cosnekenses's and when there's conekuene's there's jail time and lets just say... NOT im mean NOT a good place to be, like it sounds scary enough but when it really happens to you your going to be in that prison with poop shards going down those criminal pants... welp anyways when you go to jail it's the real deal shoot you might get killed in there... nah im just playing... or im i dun dun du so yea don't seek revenge or you'll be the one in my story.

Read the excerpt from part 2 of zeitoun. zeitoun woke with the sun and crawled out of his tent. the day was bright, and as far as he could see in any direction the city was underwater. . he could only think of judgment day, of noah and forty days of rain. and yet it was so quiet, so still. nothing moved. he sat on the roof and scanned the horizon, looking for any person, any animal or machine moving. nothing. as he did his morning prayers, a helicopter broke the silence, shooting across the treetops and heading downtown. why does the author include the details of zeitoun’s morning? to suggest the hopelessness of zeitoun’s situation to illustrate the solitary existence endured by survivors to establish zeitoun’s dedication to the rituals of his faith to reveal the military’s attempts at assistance