Sentence structures to enhance the flow Which version best uses a variety
and writing style of a story?
A. Javi walked through the dark forest. He stepped on a dry twig. It
made an echoing "crack." He looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees. He walked on.
B. Javi walked through the dark forest, and he stepped on a dry twig.
It made an echoing "crack," and he looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees, so he walked on.
C. As he walked through the dark forest, Javi stepped on a dry twig. It
made an echoing "crack." He looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees, so he walked on.
D. As he walked through the dark forest, Javi stepped on a dry twig.
Because it made an echoing "crack," he looked left and right. When
he saw no movement among the trees, he walked on.