TELL ME IF MY POEM IS GOOD He was slow as a slug but decided to sign up for track & field.
He jumped to the clouds when he made it in
His opponent was fast as the flash.
He feared his opponent more than his fear of heights.
Everyone started running at the speed of a tornado
He tripped on a small, shiny pebble
His knee was blood dripping red
He continued the race while his knee was limping

Proofread the passage and identify the spelling and punctuation errors. no one knows the exect cause of diabetes. most people who get type 2 diabetes are older, but now younger people are being diagnosed with it. like many young people, you are probably thinking, "why should i be concerned about diabetes? " the truth is that both the center for disease control and the american diabetes association are quite alarmed about the increase in type 2 diabetes among young people. information gathered in the 1990s showed a rapid increase in type 2 diabetes in children. during the 2000s, this trend is continue. scientists who study diabetes are finding that 85 percent of the children who are diagnosed with type 2 diabetes are overweight. but that is just one reason for the increase. children are at risk for type 2 diabetes if they are inactive, have a family history of diabetes, or are from african american, american indian, or asian american families.

Which event in macbeth happens first? oa. the witches plan to trick macbeth and make him overconfident.ob. lady macbeth feels guilty and kills herself.oc. macbeth learns that macduff was not "born of woman."od. banquo is killed but his son, fleance, escapes.

What is wong with this sentence cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.