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See explanation since its quite a lot:

Explanation:

Alliteration examples:

'Sad shires' This is an example of alliteration because Owens repetition of 'S' produces the same sound twice over. Similar to the hiss of a snake.

'Drawing-down' This is an example of alliteration because Owens repetition of 'D' produces the same sound twice over.

Onomatopoeia examples:

'stuttering' This is an example onomatopoeia of because it evokes the actual sound of the rifle.

'wailing' This is an example onomatopoeia of because it evokes the actual sound of the shells.

Metaphor example:

(This one was a bit more difficult because I am having trouble understanding a few words in the text but I attempted.)

'holy glimmers of goodbyes' This is an example of a metaphor because a goodbye cannot 'glimmer'. (This could be personification I believe.)

Simile examples:

I cannot find one in the text but a general example that will help is:

"As beautiful as an angel" << That is a simile.

Personification:

'monstrous anger of the guns' This is an example of personification because a gun cannot physically feel the emotion of anger.

I hope this helped, let me know if you need any more! :)

Explanation:

onomatopoeia- "The shrill, demented choirs of wailing shells"

this is onomatopoeia because the author described the noise as a shrill wich is according to the definition of onomatopoeia is "the formation of a word from a sound"

personification- "only the monstrous anger of the guns"

This is personification because guns cant be angry so the author gives the guns a human trait.

assonance- "no mockeries now for them, no prayers nor bells; Nor any voice of mourning save the choirs,--- The shrill, demented choirs of wailing shells"

This is assonance because the authour repeats the "ells" sound in both lines

I dont see any metaphors, simile's or alliteration in the poem but i hope this helps a little

answer: this is not a good thesis statement because a thesis statement is not supposed to have questions in it. a thesis states your position on your topic. a question cannot state anything because it is not a statement. a question is a great lead in to a thesis, but it can't be the thesis.