Read the paragraph from a student’s draft of a letter to the editor of the school newspaper. Select the sentences that should be revised to better match the style of the letter. Select two answers. I am deeply concerned about the recent cancellation of the upcoming lunchtime pep rally. I understand that the faculty is worried that students will be late to class after the rally. However, the rallies are an important part of developing school spirit. In addition, rallies are very cool, especially when kids get to join in. The events bring students together, and new friendships are often created. Indeed, the likelihood that two individuals might develop an everlasting bond is quite high. That’s why I’m very disappointed that this month’s rally was canceled. I certainly hope those in charge reconsider.