Read the following sentence, pausing where you think you should. Rewrite the sentence, putting the commas in to coincide with the pauses you just placed in the sentence when you read it. In other words too many people are eating too much of the wrong things not eating enough of the right things and they aren’t moving enough.

In other words ,too many people are eating too much of the wrong things, not eating enough of the right things, and they aren’t moving enough.

Explanation:

in this alternate universe, renaissance romeo is now seventeen, an apprentice to a glass maker in venice. modern romeo is planning to go to college. what major do you think he’ll elect?