PL HELP ME OUT THIS IS FOR MY LITTLE SIS Read the sentence. Do the pauses feel natural? Rewrite the sentence to reflect the natural, correct pauses. However video games, are nothing if not technologically, innovative and recent games have changed the way video games are being done.

However, video games are nothing if not technologically innovative. Recent games have changed the way video games are being done.

Explanation:

No.

Explanation:

The pauses do not feel natural because the first part, "However video games" is not supposed to be by itself, when you speak or write, you say, "However, video games are nothing if not technologically innovative and recent games have changed the way video games are being done." because it flows better and the 'however' is in contradiction to a previously spoken point, therefore there is a pause there, but not in between a point in a sentence you are still making, such as 'video games are nothing if not technologically innovative' etc.

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