PLEASE HELP! IM GIVING BRAINLIEST PLEASE Which example is part of the editing process?

A. Sonya updates her thesis statement to include new evidence she found during her research.
B. Nigel removes the evidence from his third paragraph because he can't find a credible source for it.
C. Tyce decides to add a new paragraph to his essay to help support an aspect of his thesis statement.
D. Cat makes some changes to how her quotations are punctuated after noticing that they are incorrect.

What is the narrators main conflict in this passage

98 points and brainliest for think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience. 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for drama

The man took strong sharp sudden bites, just like the dog. the figurative language in this excerpt serves to a. give the convict animalistic qualities. b. provide a relatable example of how the convict ate. c. set a scary mood. d. use alliteration to catch the reader's attention.