I am writing a literally analysis but I am having a little bit of trouble, can someone give me some tips I can include in my essay?

I mean it looks great

Explanation:

I know that that isn't the best feedback for you question but great job!!

avoid using colloquialisms such as "add insult to injury". Instead find a more formal way of describing what you are trying to say. And secondly try to avoid using the word "thing" as much as possible. It doesnt sound very formal.Try finding an alternative word or another way to form that sentence. I hope this helps!

Explanation:

i would say c, admiration because the narrator related to the main character and she, too, once felt ashamed about her culture and wished to be an american girl to impress a boy. she felt admiration because her mom prepared her favorite foods when her and robert's (the guy she liked) family all came together and had a family reunion.

c) problem and solution