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Sacrifices have contoured life into a battle between what we have and care about with what we need and want. Where do you stand? Lots of people don't know the answer and want to stand with booth, but that's where we have the most trouble because we have to have only one and can loose booth not choosing. People sacrifice time, energy and even relationships for money, power, and freedom. This can tear lives apart and also help build stronger new lives.

Many people to this day people make bad sacrifices for things like money, relationships, and power. For example a worker headed for the top of an industry may betray a coworker to get the bosses attention. They just gave up a valued relationship for more zeros on there check and was it worth it? Through out history this type of pattern is repeated over and over like american pioneers stepping over the natives to over run the country. Maybe they could have worked together to make one goal a better country instead booth lost many lives to the battle. Was that a good sacrifice?Some sacrifices may come out in ways that are not expected. They may be neutral like you may loose something to get something equally as important. A child for instance may trade a apple for a banana with there friend. It makes no real impact but the decision is already made. This kind of sacrifice is practically just a decision. Lots of Sacrifices can have a great positive impact that can benefit you widely. You may stop drinking coffee and instead save the money for your college tuition. You loose the luxury of the warm, energy filling beverage but you will be able to learn and get your degree so your options are now widened. There are many types of Sacrifices but how do you know they are worth it?

Well what is a sacrifices value how do you know what it means to make it? You may ask your self that everyday and you always seem to know. A lot of people decide what something is worth by sentimental, profitable, benefits value. some sentimental value may be the teddy bear you had since you were little but now you want to give it to your new born son. The amount of money somethings worth is profitable value. You may not want to give away the thirty-dollar desk to your grand daughter for her birthday because you know you wont get that money back, that is an instance of profitable value. you may also benefit from something and that can give it value as well. It may make you healthier, smarter, cleaner, happier, and so on but it may not be as important as the thing you need. Its up to you to decide what is more necessary to you.

Now, you may be asking how do I decide? you have to factor in the importance of what you get from the sacrifice and all the causes of that sacrifice. Like imagine you are over an edge of an elevator and you have to choose between saving your brother and your sister. You may not pull booth up who would you choose? See now your weighing in booth the pros and cons of your siblings. Well lets ease it down you will probably not have to make that big of a decision in your lifetime but do you get the point? There is an endless list of factors you have to take in a count for each and unique sacrifice.

Generally thinking sacrifices can help and be a burden. You have to choose the value and the make sacrifice to really know if it was a bad, good, or even a neutral Sacrifice. Really anyone can decide they want to go to college but its up to you that to give up your coffee is worth it. Only you can decide when and how to make a sacrifice for your benefit.