PLEASE HELP Tell the story of the picture. What just happened?what will happen next?who holds those strings and why ? Try to tell the story with strong verbs and very little “to be “.

He does

Explanation:

He just descended gradually downards from the sky in his parachute, And is grasping those strings firmly so his parachute won't fly away before he gets to hook himself up and repeat it again.

5

explanation: 4

“way of writing” should be replaced with “writing style"

“idea” should be replaced with “purpose.”

maybe   “people from a long time ago” should be replaced with “elizabethans.”