Hi, I'm writing an argumentative essay on why more american doctor should help with the uprising sickness and cardiovascular diseases and the poverty. Could someone read my intro and go over it
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Why is it that South Sudan and many other country's do not have proper medical care? Should more american doctors be taking action on the rising sicknesses and
cardiovascular diseases? But could this be endangering the lives of the american doctors or should we help face the uprising challenges that many south Sudanese people face unlike you and I? But unfortunately they don't have access to clean water, proper nutrition, and medical care. More doctors should help support the people of Sudan and many other country's. But with the help we could save the lives of children and adults

Read the excerpt from act 1, scene 3, of julius caesar. cassius. am i not stayed for? tell me. cinna. yes, you are. o cassius, if you could but win the noble brutus to our party— cassius. be you content. good cinna, take this paper and look you lay it in the praetor’s chair, where brutus may but find it. and throw this in at his window. set this up with wax upon old brutus’ statue. all this done, repair to pompey’s porch, where you shall find us. is decius brutus and trebonius there? cinna. all but metellus cimber, and he’s gone to seek you at your house. well, i will hie, and so bestow these papers as you bade me. cassius. that done, repair to pompey’s theatre. what is cassius’s motivation for sending brutus the letter? cassius wants to make sure that cinna is on his side. cassius wants to reassure cinna that brutus will follow them. cassius wants to sway brutus to kill caesar. cassius wants to alert brutus about the conspiracy against him.

What reasons does the speaker provide to support his viewpoint or claim in what to the slave is the fourth of july i read to speech and but i just don't fully understand the question i just want to make sure i get it right so to explain that the question is asking me to do. and you!

Why does the green knight laugh at their response