CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME WHAT TO CHANGE IN MY STARTING PARAGRAPH PLEASE After an argument with his father, Greg runs off to an abandon building and finds a man named Lemon Brown. Together,
they take down a group of robbers trying to find Lemon Brown's treasure. When the robbers show up, Greg changes his
actions by showing bravery, calmness, nervousness, and scared. In this essay I will compare and contrast how Greg's
emotions change throughout the story.

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Proofread the passage and identify the spelling and punctuation errors. no one knows the exect cause of diabetes. most people who get type 2 diabetes are older, but now younger people are being diagnosed with it. like many young people, you are probably thinking, "why should i be concerned about diabetes? " the truth is that both the center for disease control and the american diabetes association are quite alarmed about the increase in type 2 diabetes among young people. information gathered in the 1990s showed a rapid increase in type 2 diabetes in children. during the 2000s, this trend is continue. scientists who study diabetes are finding that 85 percent of the children who are diagnosed with type 2 diabetes are overweight. but that is just one reason for the increase. children are at risk for type 2 diabetes if they are inactive, have a family history of diabetes, or are from african american, american indian, or asian american families.

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