Guys please give me your opinion on my poem I had to write for class it is on paralysis If you ever had a stroke
Where your nerves just broke
You might know me
Though I wish I could flee
Maybe you have been numb
I am sorry that had to come
Have you felt weak?
Please do not freak
Is there stiffness in your muscles?
You can no longer hustle
Or maybe you have spasms
Do you feel you are at a chasm?
I am sorry it cannot be treated
I know it has made you heated
Therapy is recommended
Though it will not be splendid
It can keep it from worsening
But it will be burdening
It is not a cure
But you can never be so sure
Your muscle might be involuntary
When they used to be voluntary
Your sensory neurons must be shot
Or was there a clot?
Your motor neurons no longer work
Please do not think of me as a j3rk
I have not been the cause
I am just one of the flaws.

-hannah