ASAP can someone please help me with this. Q- improve this paragraph and add linguistic devices and more sophisticated vocabulary

“ we walked down the old to familiar corridors towards my grandmothers room. The route we took must have been walked by us 1000 times. The doctors are nurses knew us by name. As I turn the final term fry destination I saw my mum take a deep breath.

since it is asking for her reaction to elnora's trouble at school you can rule out any answers with a positive response (b). then you can rule out (d), this is because it does not show the mother's reaction but the daughter's response. that leaves you with two options (a) and (c), by looking at the options you can rule out (c) because it isn't referring back to elnora's issues at school.

it makes the person recieving the message not feel comfortable with the banana

a personal narrative essay is about a personal experience, so it is usually written in the first person. to maximize its impact, the essay should: be written to have an emotional impact on the reader. include a lot of references to sensory perceptions and hope i