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English, 15.01.2021 21:10 jakaylathomas11

50 points for whoever answers this Part B In the chart, show three examples of corrections you made from your edited draft. Enter your original text in the left column. In the middle column, identify the spelling, capitalization, or punctuation error that was made. Then enter your edited text in the right column. An example has been done for you.
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But then I read about Release, I put the book down and tried to rationalize how they could do this with a clean conscience.

comma splice

But then I read about Release. I put the book down and tried to rationalize how they could do this with a clean conscience.

you have too do 3 more of these from an edited draft (doesn't matter the topic preferably non politics or social veiws) (more preferably something on science)

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