How should I make this sentence make more sense? I don’t know if I should fix the semicolon or if I should make it 2 separate sentences... “By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3; because although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.”

By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3 because, although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.

Explanation:

I took off the ; and added a coma after "because" so that "although she doesn't want to do all these things" is like it's in ().

You could also make this two sentences.

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rudy is the nazi ideal, unfortunately for the nazis his ideal comes in the form of jesse the complete opposite of those who embrace the idea of white supremacy. over the course of the novel, rudy learns that he wants nothing to do with the hitler youth, and because of this his parents are forced to make a bargain; rudy's father is forced into the military, so that his son can remain home.   both liesel and hans influence that young man that rudy becomes. following han's example, rudy puts aside his own hunger to risk his life so that the jewish prisoners might have bread to eat.

the answer is a.

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