Example sentence of concise

concise:

In high school, during 3 years on the student council, I saw students enthusiasm destroyed by insecure teachers and cynical administrators.

regular setence:

in high school, where I had the opportunity for 3 years of working with the student government, I realized how significantly a person is enthusiasm can be destroyed merely by the attitudes of his superiors

what is the context here? we need to know what story you're talking about : )

boccaccio employs the voice of his narrator dioneo to represent his ideas on the tension between masculinity and femininity.  while dioneo excites the members of the brigata and recognizes women for their unique skills and independent ideas, he concludes the decameron with a story reminiscent of the society from which these young aristocrats escaped, revealing misogynistic overtones.  dioneo boccaccio is able to explore the gender disparity which is inherent in 14th century florentine society.