Can you add more details to make the story spookier/scarier?
the cabin
there was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. it was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. after what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing.
realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. he approached, and found the door ajar. nobody was inside. the hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning. as he looked around the inside of the cabin, he was surprised to see the walls adorned by several portraits, all painted in incredible detail. without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred and malice. staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep. the next morning, the hunter awoke—he turned, blinking in unexpected sunlight. looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows.

abruptly

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)