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English, 02.01.2021 02:40 Pookiev

Please help I need to get this done by today. Read your narrative aloud. Revise to improve word choice, word count, spelling, grammar, punctuation, and narrative flow.
Reflect on your writing. Polish as needed.
Finish the final draft of your narrative. Be sure to include all sections.

For years things like the media such as books and movies and TV shows have made fake Images in peoples heads about robots as evil being who wish to take out the humanity. But the truth in today’s robotic machines are far from wanting to wipe out humanity and our way of life. Robots in our age have no interest in harming humans, and they in fact were built to aid people in making a safer, healthier, and more productive life for humans and they make our jobs easier.

The main idea is that robots have been looked down upon by the media as evil but that is not true and robotic inventions are actually very helpful to humans and have no intention of harming us.

Can someone help revise and edit this. thanks

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