How does the structure of each passage affect what the passage reveals?
Passage 1 reveals the inner thoughts of the
main character, while Passage 2 reveals
only the words and actions of the characters.
Passage 1 reveals the details of multiple
settings, while Passage 2 reveals only what
the characters think about the setting.
Passage 2 reveals the point of view of
multiple characters, but Passage 1 reveals
only the point of view of an outside narrator.
Passage 2 reveals the movement of the
characters, while Passage 1 reveals only the
appearance of the main character.
Done