Armand has written a draft essay comparing his print textbooks to digital textbook his purpose is to convince readers that digital textbooks are better than print textbooks and should be used in more School District read Armand's drafts and revise it to improve these elements: purpose
focus
organization
evidence
supporting details
grammar
sentence effectiveness

So I have both my revision of this activity and the sample answer they give. My answer applies to both PLATO and Edmentum.

The white background one is mine and the gray background one is the sample answer. (Or if it is hard to tell, the one with my mouse hovering over is the sample answer.)

I hope this helps <3

c. barbarians with unexpected intelligence  

- "he is a very real person and his intent isn't to influence us vonnegut addresses this towards the end of the letter when he says, if we choose to curse, that is by our own individual means."