Quick Someone help me correct these sentences 1. an healthy bone creats new cells all the time (4 errors)

2. he handed a carton of milk to i cause strong bones need calcium phosphorus and other minerals (6 errors)

1. A healthy bone creates new cells all the time.

2. He handed a carton of milk to me because strong bones need calcium, phosphorus, and other minerals.

Explanation:

In the first sentence, the mistakes were: improper capitalization, wrong use of the word 'an', a misspelling of the word 'creates', and a lack of a punctuation mark at the end of the sentence.

The second sentence had these mistakes: improper capitalization, improper use of pronouns (turn i to me), slang term used (correct cause to because), commas listed after calcium, phosphorus, and and, and a lack of sentence punctuation.

the rhetorical technique most used in this excerpt is parallelism. parallelism is a technique which author used in sentence as substitute of repeated synthetical similarities. it is the effect of rhetorical technique.

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need more information so i can .

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