An excerpt of a business cover letter. The font is cursive and colored and the background is of water droplets. List a minimum of four changes that need to be made to this electronic cover letter before sending it to a potential employer.

A cover letter is difficult to write because you must write about yourself without sounding self-centered or selfish.

the sun warms our planet, and with the moon, creates the tides. the moon orbits the earth and in turn, the earth orbits the sun. because they appear to be the same size in the sky, the sun, earth and moon work together to create eclipses. when the moon is directly in between the earth and sun