Extension: Write an alternative ending of, "The Story of an Hour." Your ending must still include some sort of resolution of the conflict. Keep in mind, the conflict in this story is internal conflict. IT must be 4-5 sentences. I NEED HELP!

She stared at the window and right back up at the ceiling, her throat felt as if it had been tied into tight knots. She sat there thinking of what her husband had said to her before, did she really ever love him? Her body was tied down with chains of regret. She felt anxious while waiting for something to happen. All of a sudden the answer hit her head "NO". She looked down at the window one last time and saw a world of possibilities. She wasn't chained down anymore. She stood up , her eyes still fixated on the window. Each step got her closer and closer. Her pale soft fingers touching the fine glass. She opened the widow and felt a cold breeze, something about that made her feel calm. She took a last glance at everything around her, Her eyes closed, she inhaled the fresh air. Her body felt heavy as it fell backward. She could hear her heart beat louder and louder as she grew closer to the ground. Then it stopped. Her body laid there lifeless she felt cold but had a warm smile on her face.

Explanation:

answer: this is not a good thesis statement because a thesis statement is not supposed to have questions in it. a thesis states your position on your topic. a question cannot state anything because it is not a statement. a question is a great lead in to a thesis, but it can't be the thesis.

no