Can someone help me plz. can someone make my writing flow better. (easier to read) I'm wringing a speech for someone who passed away in my book for school.

We are gathered here today to remember my husband, troy, and celebrate his life.
For those who don’t know me, I’m Rose. Troy was my husband who I loved very much.
As you know my husband troy cheated on me but I forgive him. in this time I got the daughter I always wanted and started to go to church, found a new activity of my own. If it wasn’t for him I wouldn’t get any of these things. Troy was a bold man with a bold opinion about death.
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We are gathered here today to remember my Husband, Troy, and to celebrate his life. For those who don't know me, My name is Rose and Troy was my husband, who I loved very much. As you all know my husband cheated on me, but I forgave him. In that time I had my daughter I always wanted, started going to Church, and found a new activity of my own. If it wasn't for him I wouldn't be the person I am today. Troy was a bold man, with a bold opinion about death.

Explanation: There you go, Hope this Helps!! :)

from the political point of view it could be said that the candidate   is an effective speaker because she takes a strong position on the issue. it is an open discussion but probably she is making a presentation and can choose which subjects she wants to address. she is very likely to attain her aim which is to convince voters to accept her proposal.

the figurative meanings of these lines are questioning the tyger's strength and beauty. the meaning contributes to the overall message of them poem because it is explaining how strong the tyger is.

now just elaborate off of that. : )