You will revise and resubmit the introduction and body of your narrative by adding at least five temporal words or phrases. View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.
Print or save the Temporal Words and Phrases List to use as a resource.
Revise your narrative by adding at least five temporal words and phrases.
Place a (T) by each temporal word or phrase you added.
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work (including both your introduction and body) in 03.07 Transition Time.

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.