What's the punctuation error in "i would to have a hamburger, pickle, and apple

There is no period and the quotation marks need to be closed after the period.

Error is you''re missing a word "I would like to have a hamburger, pickle and apple" other error is u have a coma where the word pickle is

The career that i have* decided to present this year is photography. photographers use both aritficial and natural lighting*use a transition sentence when going into the 2nd paragraphso.. photographer? *in order for me to be a photographer* scratch "accomplish this ranking" then say, i must first.. and continue on the sentence instead of different use various*