Guys give me an essay about A Time Machine pls not copy and paste pls its do today this is the info DONT ANSWER IF U JUST WANT THE POINTS plsss this the info: A Time Machine
Imagine you have found a time machine that can magically transport you to any place in time. Write a story about your adventures in the time machine.

Remember, your narrative will be scored based on how well you

develop a multi-paragraph response to the assigned topic that clearly communicates the purpose of your narrative to the audience;
describe the characters, setting, plot, and conflict using sensory language and details that help the reader to visualize the experiences in your narrative;
organize your narrative in a clear and logical manner, including a beginning, middle, and end;
use transitional strategies to show relationships and signal changes in the narrative;
use well-structured sentences and appropriate language for your audience;
edit your work to conform to the conventions of standard American English.

Time is potent, we all heard since our childhood. Time, like a grain of sand, slips out of our hands and we only keep gazing it hunting for the tactics to combat the glissading precious moments of ours. The moments and opportunities we hold most dear, with time, just like the sand in the hourglass, skid away. We only are, then, left with the regrets of not grasping the opportunities, despondently craving for the one single chance to swish back in time and fix the deeds for our deepest regrets.

Explanation:

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.

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