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The first sentence just needs a period. Although, the second sentence is what is wrong here, this is how it should be written, "We sat by the fireplace, ate dinner, and made smores." Because you can't just jam a bunch of words together and hope it makes a sentence, a sentence needs to make sense so the readers and understand what you're writing.

Explanation:

The first one needs a period instead of the exclamation point. There isn't an exclamation coming from the sentence, so it doesn't need one to end it.

The second one should should add a comma after fireplace and after dinner.

The reason for the second one is that it is listing different items, so it needs commas.

I hope this helps!

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pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.