how should this sentence be changed? The paint in the 100-year-old mansion is peeling; therefore, the owners plan to put a greasy coat of paint on the wallss with some help from family and friends

The rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago.which choice combines these two sentences from paragraph two to achieve a coherent flow of ideas? a) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden" and permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. b) permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago and the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." c) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden; " and so the permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. d) because of the rich natural resources which made the sacramento valley a ‘garden of eden,’ native americans established permanent villages there 8,000 years ago.

Lily created comment cards to give customer during the month of july. she takes all the feedback she received and determines how the company needs to improve its product.now that the product is improved,lily is launching a social media campaign to let customers know about the changes.in what department does lily most likly work?

During the revising stage in the writing process, the author freely explores topics for further inclusion in the work polishes the writing, fixing minor grammatical errors gets his or her ideas down in roughly the form he or she intends corrects major errors and improves the work's content