What concrete detail would most improve the excerpt?
Read the excerpt from immigrant Kids, by Russell
Freedman
Men, women, and children were packed into dark
foul smelting compartments. They slept in narrow
bunka stacked three high. They had no showers, no
lounges, and no dining rooms. Food served from hugo
Kettles was dished into dinner pails provided by the
steamship company. Because steerage conditions
were crowded and uncomfortable, passengers spent
as much time as possible up on deck
Information on why the voyage was an ordeal
information on why being in America was worth the
ordeal
details about how many people immigrated to
America by steamship
details about how long the voyage to America took
The voyage was an ordeal, but it was worth it. They
were on their way to America

1) technical language (writen technical volcabulary)

2) ordinary langauge

3) literary language (because it's text with a rich, descriptive vocabulary)

4) scientific texts (includes texts such as medical reports, legal texts, academic journals, etc)

5) informational texts (texts that are used to convey information to readers, such as technical guides, costumer guides, textbooks)

6) poetic texts. because they are essays, short stories, poems, etc.

an great real life example for the lottery principle is the real life lottery itself. it adheres to the lottery principle so much it's even called lottery. you apply for the lottery in the manner of getting a ticket and if you are lucky, the goods are distributed to you, in this case, the huge amounts of money. there are other real life example but this is the best one.