Write an argumentative essay for or against setting long term goals to and a dream job. I just want to see if there is anything I could and or change.

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This is very good but it is good to add "also" or "moreover" at the beginning of your sentences so it doesn't get to boring when you keep starting your sentences with "Setting a long term goal" or "Setting long term goals". You can put "Setting a long term goal also does this ..etc" or you can put "Moreover, setting long term goals can help with...etc"

Also on your last sentence correct "it" to "they" because the goals are plural.

        its hard for some people to get along and that’s the case for douglass and canot. most of the time when people do not agree with each other its because they have different presperctives, and that is the case here.

captain canot was never a slave so but he was a slaver and a slave ship captain and just like the slave master's he tought it was it was totally normal, he used captain conot is a cruel man who enjoys whipping slaves but never   got whipped he saw it has a destiny for the slave to be a slave and the slaver to be a slaver   but douglass has suffered whoppings cut   even for no reason sometimes. douglass believed that slavery was not natural to black people, they need to study and learn how to read and write. he knew they have rights.

it was really not the captain’s fault he was just brainwashed by the system and when your brainwashed by the system its hard not to be brainwashed. but the reason douglass wants this is because he has suffered he knows how it feels and will do anything to stop that.

its definitely second person : )

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