Can someone proofread my conclusion paragraph about if I disagree or agree with football being too dangerous? If you see anything wrong tell me. High schoolers have already heard of football and it’s dangers. Football is a dangerous sport everyone knows that but it’s not too dangerous. If football was safe it would take away from the uniqueness that football is it’s the danger of football that makes it a good sport. I’m not saying a sport should be dangerous to make it good, but that exactly what makes football a game that will be here forever. I believe that parents should agree or maybe they already do that they should sign off on their kids playing football since it’s considered a dangerous sport. I disagree that football is too dangerous and needs to be made safer.

Judy blume's career as an american writer spans four decades and includes many literary awards. she is most famous for her novels geared toward pre-teens. one notable example is tales of a fourth-grade nothing. however, blume also has had success writing for an adult audience. three of her novels for adults reached the new york times best-seller list. in a 2008 interview blume remarked, "i have so many stories left to tell! " by that time she had written nearly 30 novels. judy blume is an exceptionally talented and productive american author. which of the following statements supports the main idea in this paragraph? blume only publishes books that she expects will win awards. blume prefers to write novels for adults rather than pre-teens. blume has had an extremely and uncommonly long writing career. blume is a gifted writer who can write for children as well as adults.