Persuasive Argument Essay Planner Audience: The Community
Invasion of privacy has become a community threat to both children and adults. School principals believe
Issue:
they should have access to students' social media passwords; while, police officers feel privy to searching cell
Claim: phones belonging to arrested persons.
Officials should not be able to use information they obtain from private devices or social networking sites in orier to protect the community.
Doing so, is an invasion of privacy, a violation of freedom of speech and potential abuse of power.
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invasion of privacy.
Reason #2:
violation of freedom of speech
Reason #3:
potential abuse of power
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pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.

i think the answer would mist likely be an adjective clause, because unhappy is an adjective.