This is for English. How is it, and what should I change? I'm still not done. I just wanna take my life
But if God is alive
He won't approve so
What I gotta do is
Live my life in sadness
I'm never alone but I'm always depressed
And I don't know why
I don't know why
Why do I always wanna cry
Can somebody please tell me why
I made up a saying
And some might feel the same way
Sometimes it's better to alone and to feel lonely
Than to be surrounded and to feel alone
Let me feel alone on my f*ing own
I just wanna take my life
But if God is alive
He won't approve so
What I gotta do is
Live my life in sadness
I'm never alone but I'm always depressed
And I don't know why

Id change it to if God is real

and id change it to He wouldn’t let me

and then for the second time leave it as it is!

This song is so. SAD I can feel my tears Falling from my eyebrows

Explanation:

the author is intending to draw attention to the plight of refugees, editorial and biography support this. both workpieces make the reader empathize with enrique as well as with the other young migrants from central america. the writer, however, is using a different approach to each text.

the editorial includes strong words to persuade readers. he is trying hard to convince readers in the us to change its refugee approach.

the biography relies on narrative techniques and figurative language which the writer uses wisely in the setting, characterization, and personification to educate readers on the topic.