DONT ANSWER THIS JUST FOR POINTS PLZ Rewrite the following passage so that it uses at least one subordinating conjunction, one coordinating conjunction, and one introductory phrase to transition between ideas.
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Ryan Cobb got a job at the zoo. He used to hang around his mom's house with nothing to do before that. Now he has purpose in his life. Ryan has been able to earn enough to move out of his mom's basement. He got his own apartment. He still makes a point of dropping in to see his mom as much as he can. Mrs. Cobb also worked at the zoo. She knows how rewarding it can be.

Ineed . identify the item that shows sharp and vivid details rather than vague and general ones (put a or b for your answer.) a. my brother doesn’t know the value of money. he buys new things, even though his old ones are still perfectly good. he recently took his girlfriend on a trip. they stayed at a nice hotel and ate all their meals out. while they were there, he proposed marriage to her and gave her an engagement ring. b. my brother bought a new car this year, even though his last car was only three years old and running well. he recently took his girlfriend to hawaii for a week. they stayed at a hilton hotel right on the beach and ate dinner by candlelight in elegant gourmet restaurants. on their last night there, he surprised her with a two-carat diamond ring.