The conclusion to Doug's essay on the importance of arts education in schools reads, "While not every student will grow up to become an artist, 1.4% of working Americans are artists." Which of the following rewrites would improve his conclusion?(1 point) No improvement is needed. Artists are very important and we should produce more of them. While not every student will grow up to become an artist, making and appreciating art can enrich every life. We teach health even though only 0.7% of working Americans are doctors, yet 1.4% of working Americans are artists.

Include your introduction paragraph from your introduction lesson. write three body paragraphs for your article. write a topic sentence for each body paragraph. clearly support your topic sentence with valid evidence from your research. use signal phrases with a direct quote in your article. use transition phrases to connect ideas, sentences, and paragraphs. use precise language to show your understanding of your topic. use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. write in the third person point of view. will award ! plzzz in need it now plz the topic is on everyday monsters and the only thing i need is a body paragraph on how komodo dragons are an everyday monster