List all the modifiers in the passage below: The first American roller coaster was born in Coney Island in 1875. In order to keep business up during the weekends, the railway companies set up these parks at the end to create more revenue. The first ride was called the carousel.

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because he is using a description to provide evidence to support his argument.

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the writer needs to avoid using abbreviations and check spelling before sharing.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.