Will give brainliest For anyone who has the time I want someone to look over my essay and give me their honest opinion. much appreciated!!! :D pls don't answer if ur not going to, or to get free points

Its good, but u can change and make the sentence "Some people may

think that the death penalty is effective because it kills the killer and they can’t kill anymore, or that it serves justice." a bit more specific, on the "it kills a killer and they cant kill anymore". To much use of the word "kill".

Otherwise, its is good.

Explanation:

I think it looks pretty it gives great detail and the citations at the end are pretty good. I like the drawing that you put in there. It is a very relevant paper and within the 5 pages I believe you stated the common opinion and your personal opinion while backing them up with facts. Overall I would give ya an A because it's to the point and properly formatted. It has a reason detail and fact. It doesn't distract the reader from the point and definitely gets the point across while also being very persuasive

“thy baited hooks shall tangle me no more.”

“hath taught me to set in trifles no store,”

“me lusteth no longer rotten boughs to climb.”