How do the two examples differ in their approach to similar subject matter? A. Example 1 connects to the reader emotionally by showing animals
in the wild, while Example 2 systematically explains some of the
movie's key features, such as story, characters, and actors,
B. Example 1 triggers the reader's interest by focusing on two "screen
legends," while Example 2 gives an overview of how Mooseketball
compares to the year's other sports comedies.
C. Example 2 gives an overall review of the film to explain its value,
while Example 1 provides an example of one of the movie's
highlights to connect to the reader emotionally
D. Example 2 gives emotionally detached information on the film's
budget and box office success, while Example 1 triggers the
reader's feelings by showing an emotionally charged excerpt.
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Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone