10. Hailey is working on a research paper for her literature course. She prepared her thesis statement and outline, and then developed her first draft. Now it is time to review what she has written and make any necessary changes. As she revises her paper, Hailey should

Hello. This question is incomplete. The full question is:

[...] As she revises her paper, Hailey should NOT .

develop a list of keywords to further research her topic  

Explanation:

The list of keywords and the research to deepen the topics shown in the outline of a thesis, essay, or any other academic text should not be done during the revision of the text outline, but before, during the elaboration of the outline. This is because in order to draft a text, the author must have already searched for keywords that help him to deepen the ideas he has allowing him to make a well-structured sketch that will give rise to a well-done text coherent and cohesive.

the correct answer is

1. lived in castle in naples

2.educated in monastery

3.received a doctorine in theology

4.taught in paris

5. studied in dominican monastery