PLEASE help me! I have limited time! I will give BRAINLIEST!!! Question:
Rewrite the same sentence in your own style and and describe ways in which your revision improved the sentence or made it less effective.

Sentence:
In compliance with the request of a friend of mine, who wrote me from the east, I called on good natured, garrulous old Simon Wheeler, and inquired after my friend’s friend, Leonidas W. smiley, as requested to do, and I hereunto append the result.

I would appreciate anyone’s help bcz I’m struggling so bad. Thank you :)