I need a suspenseful narrative with a continuous dialogue. Best story gets brainliest

There was this girl, who out of the blue hated her family She would always scream at her little niece, who would try to play with her all the time. There were pictures in her house of them smiling and laughing, despite the hate she felt for the niece. That day the little niece tried to grab the girl's arm and swing on it like a monkey. The girl threw the niece onto her bed. "Leave Me Alone! I Hate You!!!", screamed the girl on the top of her lungs. It was late that night and the girl tucked her niece in for the night and closed the door. "I wish she would just disappear I can't handle her anymore." Tonight her Aunt and Uncle where out of town leaving the girl to take care of her niece. She couldn't quite remember why she hated them they did a lot for her. Taking her in when her parents die, giving her a great social life, and a great school.  She left the door unlocked for them and went to bed. In the middle of the night she heard her niece scream, this didn't bother the girl. She thought her niece was being stupid so she rolled over. Another scream can be heard this time with a large bang behind it. She got up with her knee hurting very bad, walked down the hallway and into her niece's room to find her niece dead on the floor with blood on the wall that says, "BE GONE I HATE YOU!" She picked up her niece crying holding her close..."I'm sorry please come back", she cried, but she didn't mean it.The lights came on down stairs. Her Aunt and Uncle were home. The girl got up and was about to go down stairs until the lights turned off and two screams were heard. The girl was in a ball on the floor when the lights came back on. She ran down stairs to discover two more bodies. Each of them had notes attached to them. Her trembling hands picked up the notes. The first note said, "My darling girl, You are truly a killer...". The other saying, "How did you plan this all by your beautiful self?". The hand writing was her's, she couldn't understand it. She remembered her knee hurting after the bang earlier,but she hasn't been walking in her sleep since middle school. Even though she hated her family here, she wouldn't have murdered them. The lights went out and the girl screamed. Her hands around a knife while it was in her chest. "W-what" she fell to the floor, her body twitching. She had realize the lights never went out, she was blacking out.  She started to laugh, this whole time she has been waiting for this day. To put a end to her pain. A unending pain. Soon she would find another person to take to make their life just as bad her's was. "Your next", she whispers. As her final breath was taken.  

i have learned a great many things from participating in varsity football. it has changed my entire outlook on and attitude toward life. before my freshman year at [high-school], i was shy, had low self-esteem and turned away from seemingly impossible challenges. football has altered all of these qualities. on the first day of freshman practice, the team warmed up with a game of touch football. the players were split up and the game began. however, during the game, i noticed that i didn't run as hard as i could, nor did i try to evade my defender and get open. the fact of the matter is that i really did not want to be thrown the ball. i didn't want to be the one at fault if i dropped the ball and the play didn't succeed. i did not want the responsibility of the team because i was too afraid of making a mistake. that aspect of my character led the first years of my high school life. i refrained from asking questions in class, afraid they might be considered too stupid or dumb by my classmates. all the while, i went to practice and everyday, i went home physically and mentally exhausted.

yet my apprehension prevailed as i continued to fear getting put in the game in case another player was injured. i was still afraid of making mistakes and getting blamed by screaming coaches and angry teammates. sometimes these fears came true. during my sophomore season, my position at backup guard led me to play in the varsity games on many occasions. on such occasions, i often made mistakes. most of the time the mistakes were not significant; they rarely changed the outcome of a play. yet i received a thorough verbal lashing at practice for the mistakes i had made. these occurrences only compounded my fears of playing. however, i did not always make mistakes. sometimes i made great plays, for which i was congratulated. now, as i dawn on my senior year of football and am faced with two starting positions, i feel like a changed person.

over the years, playing football has taught me what it takes to succeed. from months of tough practices, i have gained a hard work ethic. from my coaches and fellow teammates, i have learned to work well with others in a group, as it is necessary to cooperate with teammates on the playing field. but most important, i have also gained self-confidence. if i fail, it doesn't matter if they mock or ridicule me; i'll just try again and do it better. i realize that it is necessary to risk failure in order to gain success. the coaches have always said before games that nothing is impossible; i know that now. now, i welcome the challenge. whether i succeed or fail is irrelevant; it is only important that i have tried and tested myself.

the topic of this essay is how the applicant has matured and changed since his freshman year. he focuses on football. one of the strengths of this essay is that it is well organized. the applicant clearly put time into the structure and planning of this essay. he uses the platform of football to discuss and demonstrate his personal growth and development through the high school years. what he could have done better was spend more time describing himself after he made improvements. as it is, he only tells us about his newfound confidence and drive. this essay would have been stronger had he actually shown us, perhaps by including a story or describing an event where his confidence made a difference

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tom robinson he was a black man that was accused of raping caucasian woman, and an idealistic lawyer offers to defend him. which makes nobody believe in the innocence of a negro.